Thursday, March 8, 2007

Admiring from Afar poem

Admiring from Afar

I want to tell her about the time,
when I wished upon a star,
that I could spend one night with her,
instead of admiring her from afar.
There she is.
That girl. You see? The one right there!
The one with the gorgeous green eyes
and that stunningly shining hair?
Wow, she looks amazing;
more adorable than ever.
Will I ever get a shot with her?
Slim chance, but I never say never.
She drives me crazy!
She is always on my mind.
I can get so excited thinking about her,
that it takes me hours to unwind.
I know I have to do something
to shake this crush on her,
but that seems pretty impossible
because I love her simple and pure.
The truth is burning inside me.
This secret is so hard to keep,
Because every time I see her smile,
my heart begins to leap.
I want to go up to her badly,
and find out if she feels the same.
It’s doubtful though that she would like me.
She probably thinks I’m lame.
Someday, I want to be the lucky one,
and quit watching from the side.
I want to make her smile and laugh,
or at least I want to try.
There she goes.
That girl. Did you see her? The one who was just right there?
The one with the gorgeous green eyes,
Who constantly holds my stare?
I want to take her out one time,
go driving in my car.
Or take a walk along the beach,
while someone else admires from afar.

1 comment:

Kera said...

why is there no comments on here?
well great sonnet james, its really well done and deep. i like lines 13&14 especially